The bar graph below shows the number of tourists visiting two different cities by season.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The shown bar graph depicts the quantities of travelers who spent time in each of two cities, Dover and Troy over four specific seasons. Overall, Dover attracts visitors better throughout the year, while Troy is busier with tourists in summer and fall, and quite quiet in other ones.
In Dover, the number of visitors has a significant increase in each of all seasons. At the beginning of the year, in spring, only 5000 tourists travel to the city which is the lowest number. However, the number of visitors abruptly surges which rockets doubly and triply at 10,000 and 15,000 people respectively in summer and fall, in comparison with the number in spring. Thereafter, the growth still continues that the winter is the busiest tourism season for Dover, welcoming 25,000 travelers.
In marked contrast, Troy does not have the steady climb throughout the year as Dover. Troy is busiest in welcoming visitors in summer which dominates first place with over 21,000 visitors. After that, the number in fall comes in turn with 20,000 tourists. Spring and winter are two unfavorable seasons for Troy that those numbers drop to the lowest number at around 5,000 visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03608247423 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37360359965 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3976851025 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118394714497 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512955912641 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394501667493 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849275541951 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173391585875 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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