Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
: Life is changing quickly every day. Technology is also developing very fast. I believe that technological development is the most important development which has a great effect on our lives. People use this advanced technologies to complete their work. These advanced technologies help to save our time and energy. This is the main reason, why I like to work by using machine.
In my view, doing work by machine is much more convenient and faster. In early days, there were no machines, and no technology was developed as today, so people used to work by hand. But, we have all these machines available, then why should not we use these? Today, we are knowingly or unknowingly depend on machines for our daily activities, like washing machine which cleans our cloths, dish washer which cleans our utensils, food processor, microwave, and oven which help us to cook our food fast. Although these machines are part of expenses; it’s worth it, as those machines save our time and energy.
In addition, machines make our life easy and comfortable. Devices like Computer, Xerox machines, and Scanner are machines which are very useful in our daily office work. In early days, people used to do all work by hand. For example, my grandpa used to do all paper work in his office, which was taking large storage. Nowadays, all our work is on computer; we hardly do paper work. We could also save our loads of data in a small chip. So, machines made our lots of work easy.
Finally, many people like to do their work by hand, because it gives them satisfaction, exercise, and relaxes them. Most of old age people prefer to do work by hand, because of two reasons: first, they cannot accept or understand new technology immediately, and second, doing work by hand keeps them busy. But, I believe, machines save our time and energy, then why should we waste our time and energy by doing same work by hand?
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