In some countries, people move abroad for their work.They have to leave their family and friends. Do you think benefits of this outweighs drawbacks?
In this era, more and more people migrate to other nations for their job opportunities and due to this, they have to stay away from their kith and keens. I reckon, that working in other countries brings about more drawbacks compared to any benefits it brings.
To commence with, the reason why people are settling in other nations is that they can have better job opportunities in their respective fields which also gives them a handsome salary. Because of this, they are able to fulfill the need of their native language members living in the home country. In other words, they can provide all the amenities to their family. To illustrate, during the early '90s, many Indians settled down in Dubai to get high remuneration.
On the other hand, this phenomenon leads to many detrimental outcomes. Almost them, the paramount demerit is that people became homesick. After a while, they start missing their family and even new technology cannot aid in this situation as it lacks human interaction. It ultimately leads to a drop in inefficiency in the work rate which is most evident during festival seasons.
Secondly, another major drawback is the language barrier for some migrants. If the native language is not learned by them, they face a huge conundrum in their day-to-day life as well as at their workplace. Moreover, racism cases have been augmenting dramatically due to the shortage of jobs. People there have to compete with the immigrants which might create a hostile atmosphere that might lead to chaos. To exemplify, African people mostly have to face this trouble.
In recapitulation, even though the craze to settle down in a foreign is on the rise, I believe that the loneliness and the other problem people face in those countries clearly outweighs its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, i reckon, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05442176871 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65975355953 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1623185391 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347669975117 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108716655922 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744971120911 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180144589055 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739384644519 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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