People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
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- Claim While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self satisfaction it should really be a source of embarrassment Reason Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree 66
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to shape' or 'shape'.
Suggestion: to shape; shape
...al and political changes but also helps shaping the future of American people and made ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ung whose products are globally ruling. Whereas, in north Korea the dictatorship still ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, still, thus, well, whereas, for example, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 58.6224719101 165% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3749.0 2235.4752809 168% => OK
No of words: 699.0 442.535393258 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36337625179 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.14184870769 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8220884916 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 327.0 215.323595506 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467811158798 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1180.8 704.065955056 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9481651518 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.935483871 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5483870968 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25806451613 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176247643864 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510299127449 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057934578751 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885075527325 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398098792246 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 162.0 100.480337079 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to shape' or 'shape'.
Suggestion: to shape; shape
...al and political changes but also helps shaping the future of American people and made ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ung whose products are globally ruling. Whereas, in north Korea the dictatorship still ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, still, thus, well, whereas, for example, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 58.6224719101 165% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3749.0 2235.4752809 168% => OK
No of words: 699.0 442.535393258 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36337625179 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.14184870769 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8220884916 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 327.0 215.323595506 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467811158798 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1180.8 704.065955056 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9481651518 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.935483871 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5483870968 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25806451613 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176247643864 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510299127449 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057934578751 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885075527325 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398098792246 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 162.0 100.480337079 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.