some people think that newspapers are the best media tool learn and get information from, while others believe that the Internet is a meter source. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this contemporary era, people receive information from various platforms. Few citizens feel that newspaper are an important medium for learning and getting information, whereas other people do not support that statement. They think the Internet is more valuable for it. This essay will explain both aspects, and also give reasons why the Internet is best. That described in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are many reasons which indicate that newspapers are reasonable. First and foremost, the information, which given in newspapers is accurate, because it printed after checking by journalists. It cannot spread wrong information, which harms society. Moreover, older people have a habit of reading newspapers. They can not adopt new technologies, therefore they prefer newspapers. For example, 80% of senior citizens in the world choose newspapers for getting information. That was written in a survey of the University of India.
On the other hand, there are plenty of benefits of getting news through the Internet. Firstly, people receive the news very quickly if they read it on the internet. It is faster to share information with civilians. Secondly, if people read news on their phone or computer, then that will help to reduce the use of papers. Hence, The issue of deforestation will solve. It is important because they can not harm nature. For instance, 60% of papers are made for printing the news.
To conclude, although newspapers are useful for getting information, the Internet is the best media. that Share news in less time, and also that cannot create a negative impact on the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...mation, the Internet is the best media. that Share news in less time, and also that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28352490421 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81571399971 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9913902456 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.6666666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204498127747 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550672104843 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595675192545 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134266579698 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714145810366 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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