The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment complex to its manager.
"One month ago, all the showerheads in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside Towers complex were modified to restrict maximum water flow to one-third of what it used to be. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet available, the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints about low water pressure, no problems with showers have been reported since the adjustment. I predict that modifying showerheads to restrict water flow throughout all twelve buildings in the Sunnyside Towers complex will increase our profits even more dramatically."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
The owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment complex predicts that modifying showerheads to restrict water flow by one-third will increase their profits by reducing the pay for water for each month. Initially, the argument seems plausible; but, at close scrutiny the argument lacks evidences in support of restricting water flow in shower heads will increase profits.
Initially, the adjustment of showerheads to restrict the flow of water has been done in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside towers complex. The argument fails to provide any relevant data regarding the uses of water before and after the adjustment of the showerheads. It is ludicrous to assume that the water requirement during showering will be less than before adjustment. It might be possible that the time taken during showering is more than before adjustment and draining the same quantity of water before and after the adjustment resulting in no any decrease in payment. It is given in the argument that the restriction has been done in the first three buildings, but it is not mentioned in the passage regarding the number of people residing inside these building. It might be possible that the number of people living in others building is high in number in comparison to the people living in the first three buildings. It will be hasty to assume that the water usage will be less by restricting the water flow without considering all these assumptions.
Secondly, the argument states a few complaints regarding the low water pressure in the building where restriction in water supply has been made. The argument fails to provide any relevant data regarding the number of complaints. It fails to state the metaphorical meaning of few in how many people residing inside the buildings. It might be possible that the actual number of people residing inside the first three building is quite low likewise the number of complains are 10 out of 50 people which is nearly 20 percent to consider the problems. Similarly, it might be possible the people fails to identify the problems regarding the lower discharge in showerheads and register complains signifying improper water pressure. Thus, all these assumptions need to clarify before coming to any particular idea of implementing water restriction in showerheads to reduce the charge of water each month.
Thirdly, it will be hasty to assume that the modifying showerheads to restrict water in all the twelve buildings increase profit even more drastically. Generally, the velocity of water flows in all the buildings is different depending upon the gravitational head. The argument fails to provide the status of various floors of building regarding the water flow. The water will flow at higher velocity in ground floor whereas the velocity decreases rapidly with the increase in height of the building. Although, the restriction of water supply in ground floor has lesser consequences in comparison to the restriction of water supply in other floors of the building. Thus, the restriction of water supply in showerheads in various storied building will irritate people and perhaps they make any intention to leave the apartment which decrease the overall profit of the complex.
In conclusion, the argument as it stands now is full of flaws and it should be supplied with the evidences in order to explain it in the form of systematic order to support the given argument regarding the increase in profits by restricting the flows of water through showerheads.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 569 350
No. of Characters: 2885 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.884 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.07 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.713 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 218 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 162 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 135 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 78 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.864 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.198 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.682 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.38 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.556 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.162 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'scrutiny'.
Suggestion: scrutiny
..., the argument seems plausible; but, at close scrutiny the argument lacks evidences in support...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...e and after the adjustment resulting in no any decrease in payment. It is given in...
^^
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...esulting in no any decrease in payment. It is given in the argument that the restr...
^^
Line 3, column 780, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... people residing inside these building. It might be possible that the number of pe...
^^
Line 3, column 856, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: high
... of people living in others building is high in number in comparison to the people living in t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 936, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...le living in the first three buildings. It will be hasty to assume that the water ...
^^
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun in seems to be countable; consider using: 'few ins'.
Suggestion: few ins
...ls to state the metaphorical meaning of few in how many people residing inside the bui...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 501, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the increase in height of the building. Although, the restriction of water supply in gro...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 110.0 55.5748502994 198% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 16.3942115768 152% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2938.0 2260.96107784 130% => OK
No of words: 569.0 441.139720559 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16344463972 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7824185139 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.365553602812 0.468620217663 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 895.5 705.55239521 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0401594371 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.545454545 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8636363636 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 6.88822355289 218% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260168036197 0.218282227539 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943047100994 0.0743258471296 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103822659004 0.0701772020484 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160670552303 0.128457276422 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814277653137 0.0628817314937 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.3799401198 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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