In this contemporary era, technology is intensifying day by day which is helping human beings in their daily routine in various ways. However, methods of purchasing, selling and technological things are changing the lives of masses. I totally agree with the statement and will expound this notion in forthcoming paragraphs.
To initiate, supermarkets and humongous malls are influencing people currently at high peaks to buy products from them because it offers a plethora of offers and discounts on various products to their customers. Even things can be purchased online from such markets and malls which is a great advantage for consumers. Big Bazaar, for instance, is an eminent supermarket around the world. Furthermore, in past, folks used to sell their goods in person to buyers however, nowadays things can be sold through OLX application or via social media sites such as Facebook without any headache of negotiations of amount. Thus, ways of buying and selling has been changed in this 21st century.
Moreover, modern technology has made and is making advances in various other fields for example, while previously pigeons were used to send messages from one destination to another whereas in this century mobile phones send messages with a blink of an eye which saves the time and is a big advantage in emergency cases. In addition to this, lives of people became more easier and faster as air conditioners pave the way to get rid of hot weather and aeroplanes can cover about 3000 km of distance in just three hours.
It can be concluded that new inventions are blessings for human beings as it stands by people in every field of work whether it is agriculture or medical
- Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing for example through cellphone tracking and security cameras In many case theh people being monitored are unaware that this is happening Do you think the advantages 78
- Some people choose to eat no fish or meat They believe that this is not better for your own health but also benefits the world as whole Discuss these view and give your own opinion 68
- Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions Discuss both sides and give your opinion 56
- Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 87
- There was a time when people only shopped out of necessity but these days shopping seems to have become a new form of leisure activity People dont appreciate the value of money anymore To what extent do you agree with this view 56
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ermarket around the world. Furthermore, in past, folks used to sell their goods in pers...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ddition to this, lives of people became more easier and faster as air conditioners pave the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...of people became more easier and faster as air conditioners pave the way to get ri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02491103203 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75119581379 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6870052976 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.363636364 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186613530461 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736192033653 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694565590836 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107320169576 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064043089163 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ermarket around the world. Furthermore, in past, folks used to sell their goods in pers...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ddition to this, lives of people became more easier and faster as air conditioners pave the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...of people became more easier and faster as air conditioners pave the way to get ri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02491103203 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75119581379 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6870052976 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.363636364 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186613530461 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736192033653 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694565590836 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107320169576 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064043089163 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.