Schools are temple from where person get knowledge and enhances his personality, physically as well as mentally. I partially agree with this statement, people who do not admit their offspring in government schools, need not to pay taxes regarding education. I will be discussing this issue in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with agree side, as parents do not take benefits of government schools by not sending their child in the public schools than they should not pay taxes because individuals are already paying more in private schools. In addition to this, fluctuations can occur in their home budget which can paves the way to traumatic stress to some people by paying double charges for education. Moreover, parents will not be able to accomplish their juvenile’s fundamental needs due to lack of money.
Turning towards opposite side, for the development in the education field, every person could pay small amount in the form of taxes. Furthermore, destitute folks’s children could get a chance to have advance and high knowledge if masses will pay taxes to support education.
It can be concluded that people should always donate some amount in the support of education field according to their budget so that everyone could get a chance to gain education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pay'?
Suggestion: pay
...ffspring in government schools need not to pay taxes regarding education I will be dis...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... more in private schools In addition to this fluctuations can occur in their home bu...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'pave'
Suggestion: pave
...an occur in their home budget which can paves the way to traumatic stress to some peo...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lkss children could get a chance to have advance and high knowledge if masses wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61159259438 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570048309179 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 207.0 20.2975951904 1020% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1053.0 106.682146367 987% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 207.0 20.7667163134 997% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 71.0 7.06120827912 1005% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337657580266 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.337657580266 0.084324248473 400% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195809596321 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527218598446 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.0 13.0946893788 809% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -138.63 50.2224549098 -276% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.0 11.3001002004 743% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.26 8.58950901804 201% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 84.8 10.1190380762 838% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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