Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others said that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, the staggering issue of environmental pollution has always been a hot topic with its ramifications. While some people believe that the loss of natural species including animals and plants is the main problem, others argue that there is a barrage of more significant ones. From my point of view, although the species loss is an emergency, I am of the opinion that humans should worry about other more serious problems.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the decrease in animals and plants is believed to pose detrimental threats. The first thing to notice is that the continuous loss of flora and fauna can trigger the lack of ecological diversity. When the number of animals and plants keeps falling, that species will soon become endangered and leave huge damage to the natural environment. Take the bamboo trees as an example, it is after their loss on a large scale in China that pandas have less food, which results in their death. Sooner or later, the natural diversity will be in danger. Furthermore, the loss of species will cut the resource for medical and life uses. Many animals including chimpanzees or monkeys have contributed greatly to the invention of life saving drugs. Without them, scientists will have to face the hurdles in science as well as citizens will lose their medicines and their food.
On the other, there are myriad environmental problems that I believe deserve the attention of the public. The first thing worth considering is the global warming. As the temperature keeps increasing in an unprecedented level, the lives of humans together with animals are threatened directly. For example, the heat waves have brought drought to the agriculture, caused death to several species in the poles, not to say the diseases that humans have to suffer. Similarly important, people need to be aware of the low quality of the atmosphere. Due to the air and water pollution, they are under dangers of losing fresh air and becoming susceptible to respiratory problems. In this sense, without doubt, humankinds will die out.
In conclusion, while the loss of flora and fauna species causes certain level of hurdles and problems, I am convinced that the environment is fraught with more severe dangers, including the greenhouse effect from global warming and the worse air quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02313624679 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65735421922 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547557840617 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0220951392 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.842105263 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232869636335 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640685295509 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814991535438 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145303935335 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101570827525 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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