Some people believe that parents have a great influence on children’s growth, but others think that influence from the outside plays a more important role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
As we realize in our day to day life, parent's and family have a great impact on their pupil's development while some people said that external factors also play a vital role in offspring growth. this essay would shed light on both views . But in my opinion , both of them has their own impression on child's progress.
To begin with, firstly parents is everything for the child. During his growth , he mimics their parents behaviour and learn plenty things with their own cognitive level.In addition to, parent is a child's first teacher and it is obvious that the character of children could be seen through the way of their parents treat them. For instance , According to many psychologist love and attention from parents lead to their children in good way while the lack of proper parental guidance fully ruin them. Moreover parents should incourage their children with lovely nature whether he is right or wrong .
Furthermore, To be succesful in their life , children should have to go school and meet new faces . this tend to develop a intelligency and understanding. Afterwards , in this age students experience many things in their life which helpful in their career later. The invaluable skills at school is the essential impact on children . These secondary elements would also beneficial for children's achievement in their life.
By way of conclusion,parents have a huge impact on children's attitude and growth , and outer factors are imperative and cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07438016529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74025679574 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623966942149 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8775274423 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181574685391 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652699684411 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451796309303 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116908307153 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668772705441 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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