Irrefutably ,in contemporary era people are more dependent on Internet, it is a kind of blessing for humans. While, with the help of internet we can search information, buy things online and also do payments .However ,it can be sometimes determinantal for human. In below paragraph we discuss their benefits and drawbacks .
The main advantage of internet is that we can find any information related to anything in just few seconds moreover we can also do video calls to the one who is far from us . Internet brings about great changes in our life ,it is very useful for that people who has a very hectic schedule and haven't a time to buying things online ,so they can order with the help of internet .In addition to , People make their payment on internet which seems convenient for them rather to take money from banks and give to the person. For instance , Nowadays due to corona virus ,even there is lockdown students kept their studies with the help of internet. in my opinion, it is such a blessing and also a time saving .
Nevertheless it has also many drawbacks such as there are many hackers on the internet , when the people make payment they can trace our card number and steal the money . Furthermore, there are so many fake sites in which they can get our personal information ,so it is very vital that people have to be more aware .And also many people busy all time on their phones and computer. They don't like to go out , to play outside which is very harmful for them and they will face many problems in the future. For instance, researchers find that with the excessive use of internet, students are getting into depression and many of them are bully online .
To summarize , Internet has more advantages than disadvantages .But people have to aware of things , it gives a lot information and also a time saving method .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65740740741 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52112496205 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512345679012 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.042955936 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193237022852 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787590505044 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512946852886 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136871291741 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556164666553 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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