Fashion changes impacts on individuals and environment
Nowadays, with the development of cultural diversity, fashion is changing everyday. It cannot be denied that the innovation of wearing styles brings some benefits. However, I strongly believe that the disadvantages of clothing change outweigh its advantages.
To begin with, there are two demonstrations which mainly reveal how constant change has negative impacts on people. First, if the styles of clothing innovate, people will blindly follow the trends without considering their budget. Furthermore, people will be on tight budgets and persons unable to spend money on necessities. In addition, recently, humans especially teenagers are affected by social platforms as individuals see some items which are advertised by the influencers so that teenagers follow the KOLs and buy those wearing items. This bad reality would lead people to be a shopaholic and even cause some psychological diseases relating to shopping.
Considering the environmental effects, the most serious influence of changing wear styles is rising the amount of waste. The innovation of clothing styles activates high rate production so that more waste will be released to the environment. And that leads to a variety of pollution such as air pollution, soil pollution which directly affect human's health.
In conclusion, while clothing style change may diversify individuals' wardrobe, the negative impacts its brings will make persons' bodies endangered. For that reason, I strongly trust that people had better not follow the innovation of wearing styles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...cultural diversity, fashion is changing everyday. It cannot be denied that the innovatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65948275862 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91407045711 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633620689655 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5686173532 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164730457437 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566278863341 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731941395932 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105964555751 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492667230699 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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