Nowadays the trend of fashion changes very rapidly, and gradually people become the salves of it. Some people think that a person should choose comfortable clothes he or she likes, regardless of fashion.
Do you agree or disagree?
The improvement of living standards is believed to have caused higher demand for fashion, because people have much more money to afford it. However, there is a fear that people will lose their own individuality, and never find what they really need. My view is that dressing up fashionably should be respected, and it is also correct to choose the clothes which people prefer for themselves.
Being fashionable is healthy and brings some benefits to us. This is because seeking beauty and wanting to look good are part of human nature. When people start to wear stylish clothes like a superstar, they feel more confident and have higher self-esteem, which is of course helpful and even essential in some social and business occasions.
Moreover, fashion is one element of popular culture. For example, South Korean fashion and TV dramas have been popular in other Asian countries for some time, and lately PSY’s “Gangnam Style” has even swept the world and many people imitate his horse-riding dance. Being in fashion and following idols makes people understand and become more involved in popular culture and feel up-to-date in this fast-dancing world.
This is not to say that everyone should be fashion-conscious. Certainly, it is a personal choice to put on comfortable clothes people are interested in. And since fashion changes over time, it would be better for people to pay more attention to something more meaningful in life, like pursuing knowledge, loving family, and cherishing friendship.
In summary, fashion should be respected, and at the same time people should have their own tastes of clothing style rather than blindly following the so-called “fashion”. Sometimes plain clothes may mirror a person’s inner peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, for example, in summary, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76309267352 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617857142857 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5834085508 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296088351381 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107586364423 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508825013512 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175631358744 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035605472651 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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