It is an undeniable truth to say that nowadays vas majority of adults are move away from their Born place from couple decades. Move away for a purpose is meaningful for them as it provides numerous benefits. I, however, believe that advantages are far better than disadvantages.
To begin with, settle in metro is offered plenty amount of opportunities in order to get jobs and better healthcare facilities. People who born in remote area do not get benefits of these amenities and eventually they have to migrate in well developed cities. Moreover, people at urban area get plethora of chance to do extraordinary job and business. Therefore, majority of citizens are settling away from their born place.
Additionally, increasing number of jobs and business are also Super beneficial for country in terms of GDP growth and it will also raise the economy of country. However, living at countryside also have a little benefits as it offeres less pollution compare to the cities. In exemplification, one can get good medical treatment in urban, while in outskirts there are quite less pollution and an individual can get prevention from deadly disease. People who live in metro has better quality of education and get chance to study in top colleges in the country. For instance, education in great university provide direct campus jobs and good work experience.
To recapitulate, living in metropolitan offer plethora of job opportunities and better healthcare facilities. Live in cities have numerous merits than demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22764227642 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94952806016 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1160605958 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155252033359 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539129249334 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059657656508 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964170230042 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786345731039 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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