due to development in science and technology, lifestyle of people across the world are becoming more and more similar to each other. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development
In this contemporary era, many changes happened because of the development of science and technology. Especially, people’s way of living all around the world become more similar. This essay will explain both positive and negative impact, and also give reasons why I believe it is a positive development, which described in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are some things, which indicate that globalization is harmful. To start with, if people start adopting other cultures, then they lose their own cultural identity. The new generation can not receive the knowledge of their brite tradition. For example, since people started using social media in India, people forget about their tradition and celebrates western cultural festivals.
However, there are plenty of reasons which push me to think it is reasonable. First and foremost, people can learn some plus points from others lifestyle, and they will improve their way of living. Secondly, globalization provide a chance to do work or a job all around the world, therefore that helps to reduce unemployment. For instance, 70% of employees, who are doing job in the US, they nationality were not the US, which written in a survey of the university of Chicago.
To conclude, although having a similar lifestyle is harmful, it also has the advantages, which help to improve peoples financial condition and lifestyle. In my opinion, it is a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Identity
...ures, then they lost their own culture. identity. The new generation can not receive the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30131004367 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88711353645 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646288209607 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.431990624 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229395355356 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692707382295 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625340508916 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131210809152 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929961152494 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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