The passage and lecture are both talking about presence of soft tissue from remnant of blood vessels in resent discovered fossils. The author claims three evidences which support present of soft tissue blood vessels in these fossils. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He states, all these evidences are incorrect.
First, the writer states, there are many channels in in broken fossilized leg bone of T .res which are correspond to channels present in bone where blood vessels were located. The lecturer refutes this notion, He elaborates on other materials rather than blood vessels present in fossils. He says, bacteria can colonize in the fossils and then decomposition of fossils materials. These bacteria had same organic material like blood vessels
Second, the author says, test showed, there were spheres that could be the remnants of red blood cells. moreover there is a dark center in sphere which is iron in the red cell blood. This argument is challenged by professor. He states, primitive animals did not have blood vessels before many years ago. These primitive species had also spheres in side their fossils. Therefore present of spheres dose not mean there is blood vessels soft tissue in fossils.
Finally, the author contents, dinosaur leg cotain collagens fibers which are considerd as biochemical materials for soft tissue. The lecturer contradictes this point. He points out, collagen fibers did not find in animals before long time ago. He mentions, these collagen fibers may be from skin cells of researchers orfrom their bones.
The passage and lecture are both talking about presence of soft tissue from remnant of blood vessels in resent discovered fossils. The author claims three evidences which support present of soft tissue blood vessels in these fossils. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He states, all these evidences are incorrect.
First, the writer states, there are many channels in in broken fossilized leg bone of T .res which are correspond to channels present in bone where blood vessels were located. The lecturer refutes this notion, He elaborates on other materials rather than blood vessels present in fossils. He says, bacteria can colonize in the fossils and then decomposition of fossils materials. These bacteria had same organic material like blood vessels
Second, the author says, test showed, there were spheres that could be the remnants of red blood cells. moreover there is a dark center in sphere which is iron in the red cell blood. This argument is challenged by professor. He states, primitive animals did not have blood vessels before many years ago. These primitive species had also spheres in side their fossils. Therefore present of spheres dose not mean there is blood vessels soft tissue in fossils.
Finally, the author contents, dinosaur leg cotain collagens fibers which are considerd as biochemical materials for soft tissue. The lecturer contradictes this point. He points out, collagen fibers did not find in animals before long time ago. He mentions, these collagen fibers may be from skin cells of researchers orfrom their bones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The passage and lecture are both talking...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... tissue blood vessels in these fossils. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
... writer states, there are many channels in in broken fossilized leg bone of T .res wh...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ls in in broken fossilized leg bone of T .res which are correspond to channels pre...
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Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'corresponded'.
Suggestion: corresponded
...fossilized leg bone of T .res which are correspond to channels present in bone where blood...
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Suggestion:
...utes this notion, He elaborates on other materials rather than blood vessels pres...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...uld be the remnants of red blood cells. moreover there is a dark center in sphere which ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: moreover,
...uld be the remnants of red blood cells. moreover there is a dark center in sphere which ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...had also spheres in side their fossils. Therefore present of spheres dose not mean there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 253.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21343873518 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41118382404 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5500646328 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5882352941 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506375888839 0.272083759551 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157831902888 0.0996497079465 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171733672578 0.0662205650399 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318380856844 0.162205337803 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.237229863408 0.0443174109184 535% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.0289183223 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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