Education is a very important thing in our life. Physical education and social classic are as crucial as labraries and other classes and should recieve egual financial support. In this essy I will give reasons to explain why I fell that.
First of all these classes give apportuneties for students to comunicated togather longer time which is very important thing to stronge their personlatity and learn them skills of comunication so they can share knowleges and information between between them and can get their academic classes with positive energy so can be more attaintion to topic and this will improve their levels and get high score. Moreover, in the elective classes we can find a lot of friend. In my life I have good example, My son was very shy and can not communicate with other students in his class, but when he sign in music night event in his school, he made a new friend which share him a same hobby and spend a very nice time with them. then he can overcome his problem. furthermore, this friendship continue until now. so this explain the importance of music, social and art classses.
Inaddition, sports are as important as another classes for every one and any age. Student need physical education class because they are important for health and for positive energy. the sport increase blood flow to all parts of body so maitain brain, heart and muscles healthier. For instance before one year ago I was over wight as aresult I had jionts pain so I decided to go to enrolled in baseket ball team in my collage,so I have to train enough time .After a while I began to loss my wight gragually till reach to ideal wight. then the my knee pain disappear and I become more healthy than before
In conclusion, due to importance of social communication and heatlh improvement I believe that sports and social classes are very important for students and should have afinancial support like academic classes,
Education is a very important thing in our life. Physical education and social classic are as crucial as labraries and other classes and should recieve egual financial support. In this essy I will give reasons to explain why I fell that.
First of all these classes give apportuneties for students to comunicated togather longer time which is very important thing to stronge their personlatity and learn them skills of comunication so they can share knowleges and information between between them and can get their academic classes with positive energy so can be more attaintion to topic and this will improve their levels and get high score. Moreover, in the elective classes we can find a lot of friend. In my life I have good example, My son was very shy and can not communicate with other students in his class, but when he sign in music night event in his school, he made a new friend which share him a same hobby and spend a very nice time with them. then he can overcome his problem. furthermore, this friendship continue until now. so this explain the importance of music, social and art classses.
Inaddition, sports are as important as another classes for every one and any age. Student need physical education class because they are important for health and for positive energy. the sport increase blood flow to all parts of body so maitain brain, heart and muscles healthier. For instance before one year ago I was over wight as aresult I had jionts pain so I decided to go to enrolled in baseket ball team in my collage,so I have to train enough time .After a while I began to loss my wight gragually till reach to ideal wight. then the my knee pain disappear and I become more healthy than before
In conclusion, due to importance of social communication and heatlh improvement I believe that sports and social classes are very important for students and should have afinancial support like academic classes,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77844311377 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58210924984 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.632435182 48.9658058833 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 114.0 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369040467587 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147208866062 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1615328418 0.0737576698707 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318101535596 0.150856017488 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.327536364242 0.0645574589148 507% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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