Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.Do you agree or disagree?Provide relevant examples if necessary.
The importance of handsome salary package was always a debatable issue which has now become more controversial. some communities admit that job reliability is more essential. On the contrary, others do not stand with this perception and deem that high wage rate is most significant part of being an employee. In my opinion, I do agree with latter notion and this would be rational enough to support the further discussion with an analytical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that, in this contemporary era inflation is on it's peak. to survive on earth, people have to earn as much as they could on that situation job satisfaction doesn't play any role in real life. Another pivotal aspect of this regard is that, most of the mature have particular degree in which they spend vast amount and some take loans as well because of not from backgrounds. So to reimburse the loan installment they need lucrative salary packages instead of gratification.
Furthermore, finding happiness in jobs is a kind delusion. Peopl cannot replace money with pleasure as everybody know that happiness could buy through money on some extend, as well as if there will be not appropriate income package than it would be next to impossible to fulfill the ever increasing demand of family members. On the other hand, if the notify turnover company offer that mean an individual is sufficient to support members financially , they can accomplish dream of visiting abroad in holidays , may buy dream car and so on. which satisfaction job cannot lead this all luxurious. Hence, many are in favour of high budget income jobs rather then finding regard.
To encapsulate, after a careful analysing one can reach to consequence that respect in work matter but it cannot cope up with current era where inflation is dominating along with family and person own necessity, so huge earning in job create prolifics advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77621807069 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5577739381 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128030837312 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493927391592 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400667941392 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070552148248 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422797193302 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.