Dear Mr. Lucky Ali,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you in good health and prosperity! I am writing this letter to invite you in private party at my home in Borneville. I have arranged this party on the auspicious occasion of my parents silver jubilee marriage anniversary. I have been planning this party since long time. Nevertheless, since my parents are the biggest fan of your music, I would like to invite you to perform on the stage along with your band.
Moreover, you are a very popular singer among the youngsters and adults. There will be around 100 people in the party including people from all the age groups. Therefore I would like you to think about my invitation and take out your precious time for us from your busy schedule. The venue of the party is 546 Raod, Hills Apartment, Borneville. I would also provide you pick and drop facility for you and your band.
Eagerly waiting for your kind response.
Your sincerely,
Mohsbsj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...private party at my home in Borneville. I have arranged this party on the auspici...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ts silver jubilee marriage anniversary. I have been planning this party since lon...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...cluding people from all the age groups. Therefore I would like you to think about my invi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72781065089 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45458736342 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1561120777 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5833333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307692472157 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105539062756 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670943291938 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179477706891 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915737109903 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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