From last two decades this topic is catching a significant attention of society that whether mobile phone is good for children or it only brings disadvantages for young generation. The main attraction of mobile phones for the young generation is the use of internet and social media.
On the first hand, it is reasonable to say that mobile phone has made our life easy in many aspects. For example, when the kid is going out for any school event of coaching/ tuition, mobile phone could make it easy for parents to communicate with him/ her. So for the safety purpose of the kid it is a perfect invention. The other best example of mobile usage is in the field of education. Internet is the best source of any kind of information be it is related to studies, project making or general affairs.
The other side of the coin, along with many advantages mobile bring numerous disadvantage in the children's life. Many studies proved that unlimited usage of mobile phone is really dangerous for the brain. It could stop the growth of brain and cognitive skills of growing kids. Although this is the fact that in modern days our life is vitally depends on the cell phones.
In my opinion bring significant changes in our life. To mitigate the problems related to mobile, parents should make some rules on the usage timing. Guardian should also keep an eye on the kids that what kind of things they are watching. With the help of rules and regulations we can address this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...egulations we can address this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45485872525 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3546598444 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138860168403 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464212796599 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504884968425 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863486811697 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553062069781 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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