The line graph illustrates amount of water consumed in four towns during a whole year. It can be seen from the graph that town C used the highest volume of water while town D utilized the lowest.
Town C had the largest amount of water consumed among four towns during four seasons. Its water consumption was 70 in summer, the highest in four towns; however, it decreased significantly to less than 15 during autumn. The figure increased greatly to nearly 50 in winter and remained nearly stable until spring, which was the biggest in four towns. Totally, over four seasons, town C consumed the biggest volume of water at nearly 185.
On the other hand, town D had the lowest amount of water consumption over the whole period. In summer, town C utilized the figure of 25, which was nearly three times lower than town C. Furthermore, the figure started to decrease slightly to nearly 10 in autumn. Moreover, the statistic of town D continued to reach the bottom at eight in winter, however, it increased to approximately 15 in spring. In total, town C figure was the lowest over four towns.
- The graph shows seasonal water consumption in four towns rewrite alam 67
- The graph shows seasonal water consumption in four towns 67
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- The graph shows seasonal water consumption in four towns rewrite alam 67
- Many people now have personal computers and the use of internet is becoming more widespread Many people are concerned about children using internet to access adult websites gamble or buy goods on credit How can internet access by children be controlled 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... figure was the lowest over four towns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46925539834 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5040054071 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.9090909091 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304250928332 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140115550429 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836125873507 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241548369509 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498672146248 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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