Some people think it is necessary to use animals for testing medicals intended for human uses. Others, however, think it is cruel and unnecessary to do that. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Animal testing is the use of non-human animals in experiments that seek to control the variables that affect the behavior or biological system under study. There has been a controversy among people over the necessity and humanity of this test. Though I am an advocate of animal testing, each side has its own reasons and I will explain them in greater detail in the following.
On the one hand, animal experiment benefits human. Life develops, followed by plague and diseases that pose a threat to human’s life. Animals whose genes bear much resemblance to human’s, for example, guinea pigs, are used to assess new vaccine and medicines. Without animal testing beforehand, these medications will be used on humans without no guarantee of safety, which may end up with severe changes in their body, or even take their lives.
On the other hand, animal testing can be considered cruel. Human makes use of other species for one’s own sake, forcing them to use new and even toxic chemicals without taking their feelings into consideration. However, this is unavoidable. There is nothing that can replace animal experiment at the moment. Until when there is something can, humanity have to sacrifice other spicies’ lives so as to save their own lives.
To conclude, I believe that vivo experiment is irreplaceable at the moment, despite the unfairness to other species. It has been a bone of contention eversince its invention. Conflicting opinion revolving around it will not stop until there is an alternative.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... have to sacrifice other spicies’ lives so as to save their own lives. To conclude, I b...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10843373494 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7313075563 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4232912412 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262413813349 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789286258561 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601712063867 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149012091564 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677794015114 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... have to sacrifice other spicies’ lives so as to save their own lives. To conclude, I b...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10843373494 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7313075563 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4232912412 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262413813349 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789286258561 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601712063867 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149012091564 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677794015114 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.