You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter
• explain how you found the shop
• describe the item that you would like to sell
• say how much you would like to sell the item for
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to one of the oldest coin that I am willing to sell at your shop. Let me explain you how I found your shop.
I came to see the beauty of Udaipur and while roaming my eyes got stuck to one of the antique in your shop. Moreover, I was so fascinated that I end up visiting your entire gallery of old things. Additionally, I enquired about your place in Google listing and found to be legitimate.
As for the item, I am looking forward to sell 25 paisa 10 coins of year 1973. Also, it is not the normal coin as made up of material used today but is constitute of silver coating that makes it more precious.
Additionally, I have 1 10 rupee old coin, however, I would like to sell 25 paisa coin esch costing 2 lakhs at least. These old money matters a lot because of its existence till date so I find the selling price worth it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to selling'.
Suggestion: to selling
... As for the item, I am looking forward to sell 25 paisa 10 coins of year 1973. Also, i...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'constituted'.
Suggestion: constituted
...s made up of material used today but is constitute of silver coating that makes it more pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, moreover, so, while, as for, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29281767956 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36636999826 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1319752657 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6363636364 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2810017514 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939380722806 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838335462795 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137973715452 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078260473532 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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