It is generally considered that the better way to gain about other customs is to work in multinational companies.I largely disaccord with said notion due to on internet and with another nations people friendship.
To commence with,the internet is very useful thing to know about the another nation ceremony.To elaborate it,People can finding customs of another country on GOOGLE.Also they can gain knowledge about any ritual and country.To epitome ,a survey was conducted by the american university in 2018 that 59% persons can speaks four languages without working with other countries.Hence,masses from other countries also love individuals who know their customs.
Furthermore,when mortals friendship to another country humanity,also they know about another country culture.To explain it,friendship is a good thing between two nations humans.with this they know both nation culture.They can explicate their culture openly.For instance,a headline was published by " THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that in america 2018 many teenagers friendship with the another country children and they recognize about other tradition.It also helps them in their studies.As a result,when they go to other homeland for further study then they can not face any problem related with culture.
To conclude,it is also clear that without any work with other state they know anout another empire from online and they can know from make friends with people.
- For some people shopping is not just about buying what is necessary but a form of entertainment Do you think it is a positive or a negative development Give your opinion and examples from your experience 56
- The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, so, then, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70183486239 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04387093023 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600917431193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.537362209 49.4020404114 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.75 106.682146367 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.5 20.7667163134 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.25 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833733592394 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658748951426 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296519654466 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658748951426 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296519654466 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.67 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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