In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In the near future all transportation system which we use daily life will be move without drivers. All people travel inside these vehicles might be only passengers.
The primary advantage sides of driverless vehicles may be cheaper than non- manual transports. Therefore, many people prefer to travel these vehicles, although they move very slow. Furthermore, driverless vehicles will move with scheduls so people will not face traffic jams even during the rush hours. For instance, nowadays, some people face traffic congestion on the roads, while they travel other places especially, during the rush hours, so driverless vehicles may reduce traffic jams in the future. Moreover, all people might be safety during the travel these transports, because they always control how to move by professionals. They will have sensitive sensors, so they might be crash even during the night, as a result, transports accidents might reduce in the near future.
However, they have some drawbacks which is detrimental effect on human beings. If all transports move without drivers, people will lose their ability which is how to drive and fix their vehicles. In addition, these transports may reduce to use bicycle, as a result, it is negative impact o peoples' health. Above all, people may have obesity after utilize these transports. Besides, driverless vehicles move slowly, so people late their destination.
To sum up, I really do believe that using these transports will be more benefits than harms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33755274262 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61969935103 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565400843882 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2029103621 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356920199351 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140579314171 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084526108138 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237170101243 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747617545807 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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