The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps depict the modernization of an island before and after having some new facilities constructed to serve the purposes of boosting and bolstering tourism.
Overall, the town has witnessed exponential development, the most prominent of which is a range of housing accommodations in the central area, as well as the construction of a new pier to the south of the island for traveling and business intentions.
It is also immediately noticeable that the flora in all parts of the island has been perfectly conserved after the modernization with no trees having been removed. Furthermore, new paths have been constructed within the housing area with an oval shape, including smaller conjunctions leading up to each house.
Align itself with the housing areas is a reception desk and a restaurant that lies north of the island. Last but not least, to the west of the island, there has been an addition of a swimming pool area, which is in close vicinity of the beach.
- The diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Lakeside between 2000 and 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 90
- The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives a person an opportunity to help other people To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries in 2009 and 2019 and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96341463415 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95164782218 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.790872086 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169654645198 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897728021241 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922867288932 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118359865266 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102458178896 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.