In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.
Populations of industrialized nations indeed grow older. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies could take steps to address this issue.
There are several problems with the growing population of elderly people. Firstly, when people expect to live longer, the number of retired people will increase. This would lead to a rise in claim pension benefits and a decline in the proportion of working-age people paying income taxes. Higher pension expenditure, as well as lower tax revenues, would have a significant impact on the national budget and the economy as a whole. Secondly, increasing average life expectancy would put a heavy burden on the health care system. Specifically, the elderly people could be more vulnerable to chronic diseases such as heart attacks, cancer, so they would require special medical treatments and long-term care. Governments would have to devote a larger budget to health insurance that serves senior citizens.
The government could take a variety of measures to tackle the problems raised by rising lifespans. The first solution would be to encourage the immigration of working-age people to increase income taxes for the government. This money could lessen the pressure of national spending on healthcare, accommodations, facilities when the number of older citizens rises. Another measure would be to promote elderly health including the encouragement of healthy diets, more active lifestyles, and the reduction of tobacco, alcohol. A healthier population could lead to higher saving rates, lower medical expenses. The healthier senior citizens are better able to continue working longer and enhance their productivity in work.
In conclusion, various measures could be taken to deal with the problems that are certain to arise with the growth of the average expectancy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55985915493 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8587451139 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8472305507 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263366359042 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785400994651 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573433983424 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168038277773 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259016502917 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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