Claim: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the students major field of study.
Reason: Acquiring knowledge of various academic discipline is the best way to become truly educated.
Education is important to every one in this leading world. Acquiring knowldege of various field useful to survive in world. I Partially agree with Claim and disagree Reason for the given claim.
I Agree with claim which university Should require every student to take variety of courses out of major field of society.By implementing this University level Student mindeset get updated and thing in different way. Extra curriculam activity, may take student differ rather just doing only major course study. One of the major important thing time management, so student get perfection over time management.
In industrial working situation may occour, that employee to be lose job due to layoff. at that instant employee having an another oppertunity in doing or earning money from that extra academeic discipline. If some one got an idea about his extra academic discipline he may work in full fladge. this many advantage in start up for business.Even though for example if someone doing carrer in Engineering and also extra academic discipline in Music, so he may start music classes batch as extra earning.
Besides that, University may not enforce to do extra academic discipline.Extra academic discipline courses may offordable or not to student this will take into consideration. at the same time if student poor in his major course of subject and good in extra academic discipline it may affect at time of job interview. getting job is somewhat difficult. for this instance interviwer suggest to candidate to firm on only one decision.
So, there both views in adopting extra academic discipline may agree with given claim. and at some stage it may not agree with Reason provided.
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| 2021-07-08 | Anirudha Balaji Shirsikar | 50 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 274.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20072992701 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74859197506 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1095225822 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0625 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286294784091 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924506814689 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922595876812 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163738170915 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993937452922 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.