The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.
Some people believe that treatment is more important than prevention. However, in my opinion, I think prevention is better than cure and the government should allocate funds accordingly. In this essay, I will propose possible illustrations for the same.
To begin with, the government should provide an appropriate budget to have cleanliness. It is known for a fact that untidy or unsanitary places are the cause of health issues and diseases often originate from such places. For example, people living in slums often possess various kinds of medical conditions. Due to a lack of infrastructure and manpower authorities are unable to maintain the hygienic conditions for the citizens.
Secondly, the government should invest in research. It will help to counter serious and newborn diseases which will prevent health problems and also, as treatment of patients is very costly and sometimes they cost a fortune even in government hospitals. For example, in the corona pandemic, many countries failed miserably due to a lack of research in the medical area and the treatment was unmanageable. Studies in the medical field will definitely boost the country's economy.
To conclude, it is necessary to prevent illness, so, the government should focus on sanitary conditions and medical research. further, it will act as a security shield against diseases and it will be a lot easier to overcome diseases as there would less number of patients. So, I strongly agree that prevention is better than treatment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90473750966 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3207957724 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236500776464 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800896227683 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712474095714 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142425571375 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637009578458 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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