The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?
Preventing health issues as well as serious diseases is more crucial than remdey or therapy, however, the facilities to support this method sometimes is not available. Therefore, financial support from government is needed to underpin medical precatuion. I personally believe that preventing is way more efficient than curing massive affection of certain illness, thus, public leaders should tackle this onward threat by allocationg national revenue to such spot in medical care.
i think that we should more focus on prevention. anticipation is more affordable than paying a hefty cost for special care and medicines. When people are aware about their medical conditions by doing routine medical check up and living a healthy live, they can easily withstand from illness. Hence, free routine medical check-up as well health consultation in hosiptal should be provided through governments funds by local administrators. Meanwhile, remedy can be so expensive to handle a serious virus. AIDS for instance, it can cost people up to millons dollar per month both for treatments and medical drugs. As a result, government should be more concern on preventing health issue rather than curing for because it is cheaper and can be afforded by everyone.
Others, however, state that preventing is not effective as curing. They argue that modern society is too busy for medical check-up or living a healthy live. For example people in the municipality, they prefer to eat instant meal everyday, they rarely to do exercise. So that, they prefer to consume medicines and treatments everytime they get sick.
Nevertheless,I think by giving good advice as well as provide medical facilities in every office is probable to prevent this busy people from being affected by certain diseasess.
In conclusion, public leaders should more focus on precautions rather than treatments and medicines to counter medical issues.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
... revenue to such spot in medical care. i think that we should more focus on prev...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... revenue to such spot in medical care. i think that we should more focus on prev...
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Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anticipation
...hat we should more focus on prevention. anticipation is more affordable than paying a hefty ...
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Line 2, column 764, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heaper and can be afforded by everyone. Others, however, state that preventing i...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...pality, they prefer to eat instant meal everyday, they rarely to do exercise. So that, t...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and treatments everytime they get sick. Nevertheless,I think by giving good advi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...everytime they get sick. Nevertheless,I think by giving good advice as well as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40604026846 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78758896232 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9397469502 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230385756797 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783169246186 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634514396836 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128823925855 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632644665597 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... revenue to such spot in medical care. i think that we should more focus on prev...
^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... revenue to such spot in medical care. i think that we should more focus on prev...
^
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anticipation
...hat we should more focus on prevention. anticipation is more affordable than paying a hefty ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 764, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heaper and can be afforded by everyone. Others, however, state that preventing i...
^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...pality, they prefer to eat instant meal everyday, they rarely to do exercise. So that, t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and treatments everytime they get sick. Nevertheless,I think by giving good advi...
^^^
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...everytime they get sick. Nevertheless,I think by giving good advice as well as ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40604026846 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78758896232 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9397469502 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230385756797 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783169246186 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634514396836 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128823925855 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632644665597 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.