The main topic in reading passage and lecture about Agnostides which are a group of marine animals . These species extinicted befor many years ago and their fossils do no give a good information about them. The writer claims several theriories about how Agnostids may have lived. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions, unfortunatly, each theriory present in passage have weakness.
First, the writer states, Agnostids were free-swimming predators, they can swim fast, because, there are examples of primitive arthropods living this way. This statement is challenged by professor. She cites, the primitive arthropods have a big eyes to see their pray and protect their eyes with barriers.But agnostids had a very small eyes and partialy blind. Therefore , they can not live in ocean.
Second, the author asserts, agnostids were seafloor dwellers. Because, there are many examoples of primitive arthropods living in sea and feed by grazing on bacteria. The lecturer n the other hand refutes this notion. She suggests, agnostids can seen in many different and distant area in ocean which are far a way from their orginal dewelling. This mean that agnostids can swim fast and for long distance. furthermore sea primitive speases can not move fastly or for long distance.
Finally, the author says, thses agnostids were parasits. The lecturer contradicts this notion. She elaborate on small size of parasits comparing to size of agnostids. moreover, parasits need small scavanger to parasit on it. But agnostids big size need larg species to parasit on it.
The main topic in reading passage and lecture about Agnostides which are a group of marine animals . These species extinicted befor many years ago and their fossils do no give a good information about them. The writer claims several theriories about how Agnostids may have lived. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions, unfortunatly, each theriory present in passage have weakness.
First, the writer states, Agnostids were free-swimming predators, they can swim fast, because, there are examples of primitive arthropods living this way. This statement is challenged by professor. She cites, the primitive arthropods have a big eyes to see their pray and protect their eyes with barriers.But agnostids had a very small eyes and partialy blind. Therefore , they can not live in ocean.
Second, the author asserts, agnostids were seafloor dwellers. Because, there are many examoples of primitive arthropods living in sea and feed by grazing on bacteria. The lecturer n the other hand refutes this notion. She suggests, agnostids can seen in many different and distant area in ocean which are far a way from their orginal dewelling. This mean that agnostids can swim fast and for long distance. furthermore sea primitive speases can not move fastly or for long distance.
Finally, the author says, thses agnostids were parasits. The lecturer contradicts this notion. She elaborate on small size of parasits comparing to size of agnostids. moreover, parasits need small scavanger to parasit on it. But agnostids big size need larg species to parasit on it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The main topic in reading passage and le...
^^
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ides which are a group of marine animals . These species extinicted befor many yea...
^^
Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ay and protect their eyes with barriers.But agnostids had a very small eyes and par...
^^^
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...small eyes and partialy blind. Therefore , they can not live in ocean. Second, t...
^^
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the other hand refutes this notion. She suggests, agnostids can seen in many dif...
^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...is notion. She suggests, agnostids can seen in many different and distant area in o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...n. She suggests, agnostids can seen in many different and distant area in ocean which are far...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ds can swim fast and for long distance. furthermore sea primitive speases can not move fast...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...ds can swim fast and for long distance. furthermore sea primitive speases can not move fast...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...arasits comparing to size of agnostids. moreover, parasits need small scavanger to paras...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 252.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26587301587 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68911471728 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.491689168 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.35 110.228320801 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6 21.698381199 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345290099911 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985520189387 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16591761448 0.0662205650399 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227251174816 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.297953080723 0.0443174109184 672% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.8541721854 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The main topic in reading passage and le...
^^
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ides which are a group of marine animals . These species extinicted befor many yea...
^^
Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ay and protect their eyes with barriers.But agnostids had a very small eyes and par...
^^^
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...small eyes and partialy blind. Therefore , they can not live in ocean. Second, t...
^^
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the other hand refutes this notion. She suggests, agnostids can seen in many dif...
^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...is notion. She suggests, agnostids can seen in many different and distant area in o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...n. She suggests, agnostids can seen in many different and distant area in ocean which are far...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ds can swim fast and for long distance. furthermore sea primitive speases can not move fast...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...ds can swim fast and for long distance. furthermore sea primitive speases can not move fast...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...arasits comparing to size of agnostids. moreover, parasits need small scavanger to paras...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 252.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26587301587 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68911471728 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.491689168 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.35 110.228320801 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6 21.698381199 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345290099911 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985520189387 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16591761448 0.0662205650399 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227251174816 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.297953080723 0.0443174109184 672% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.8541721854 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.