Men and women are counter parts who cause development of society. As the time is advancing the geder discrimination in vanishing in current times. Occupation segregation by gender is a regressive thought in my opinion, and any partiality I invalid.
There are so many jobs in the world in every field such as engeenering, farming, and sports, etc. ; but if go past the thinking of people was that few jobs are male dominated like farming, politics, etc; few fields are female oriented profession like cooking, dusting. Today's world is based on modern thinking. The gender discrimination is very less, only in few countries. On the other male dominated profession especially politics, in which females also achieve big achievements. Jacind arden is a female and also president of newzealand which is very developed and beautiful country The age of newzealand's president is 42. Another one us sara marin and her age is 35. She is president of Finland. These ladies are most successful presidents of the most developed nations.
Furthermore there are female oriented fields in which males achieve too much success like vikas khanna. He is famous for cooking in all over the world. He is very successful chef and also conduct some live shows to encourage cooking as a men.
Indian government has also declared that womens can work at high level posts in armed forces. Behavior of individual can be different from other, but skills of different cannot be different for males an females.
In conclusion, gender discrimination today perpetuated by the belief that women and social economic, familial. Their uniform particifcation in any field must be encouraged.
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities Therefore somecertain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women To what extentdo you agree or disagree 81
- The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in cities attempts must be made 78
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities Therefore somecertain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women To what extentdo you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...parts who cause development of society. As the time is advancing the geder discrim...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is very less, only in few countries. On the other male dominated profession espe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ents of the most developed nations. Furthermore there are female oriented fields in whi...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...some live shows to encourage cooking as a men. Indian government has also declare...
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Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...me live shows to encourage cooking as a men. Indian government has also declare...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...different cannot be different for males an females. In conclusion, gender disc...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an female' or simply 'females'?
Suggestion: an female; females
...different cannot be different for males an females. In conclusion, gender discriminati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17407407407 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91927399296 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1852241715 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5263157895 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2105263158 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136722997902 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338212947432 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438340841043 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717786963711 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263402110177 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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