Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people's attitudes toward the notion of how to become successful brings to light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether it is better to work alone or as a team. Although some people assert that working solitary, a person has a better chance to succeed, I, as a recently graduated university student, believe that working in a team, a person would have more chance to become successful.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that although a person may have a great idea at the begining, the implementation segment is usually the part that most people fail to deliver the work they supposed to. Resent studies conducted by Harvard University, department of effective study, conspicuously divulged a link between failing to solve the very first a few problems a person faceing, while trying to solve a problem, and becoming completely dispair of solving it and leaving it eventually. The most significant aspect for leaving the duty is that a person who does not have anyone to hearten him would leave the task because they are afraid that they will humiliate themselves in front of other. Hence, it is important to have someone, as knowledgable as the person himself is, in order to encourage him to be persistant thorough the whole project and do not become hopeless.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that members of a team can share the solutions that cross their minds, while they face a problem, and therefore, find a solution not only quicker but also more efficient. Not having this ability to consult to each other, they may choose a solution that may seem beneficial but at the end turn to a total disaster or very costly solution. It is important that members of a team have the critisizing attitude toward each other in order to find loop holes faster and prevent failure in the future--since by mentioning flaws in one's propusal, a person can save the team time and money. Hence, working in a group, members have a better chance to become successful.
Admittedly, not all group members are going to be fruitful and it is not odd to consider in some groups that only one person doing the whole job. Nonetheless, teamwork is always better even members pressence can sometimes encourage the mastermind of the team to work harder.
Due to the aforementioned arguments explored in the previous statements, I personally claim that working in team has better chance of succeed, for members will not be dispaired at the early stages and they can find a solution faster and more thorough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80405405405 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68406770073 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506756756757 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.878240695 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.076923077 100.406767564 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1538461538 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115003395969 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048880204661 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383230823903 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776840728176 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302944259473 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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