now-a-days, the age gap between the parent and the off-springs rising compared to the past. Although, the difference in age means the parents have spent most of there time in there carries and became financially strong, they will miss the emotional parenting in their early ages. In spite of some positives, there are many drawbacks.
On one hand, the gap is huge means the parents have flourished in their carrier and became financially strong so that they can live and grow their children in a happy way. After having kids the main duty of their parents is to give a good life for this money is required. Earning money usually takes time, without sufficient financial strength they can never sucied in giving what their kids what. For instance, if a father is having a secure job or business and made proper savings then he send his son or daughter to any school or college that provides quality of study.
On the other hand, it also has a major drawback. Parents generally want there children to succed in there life and see there achievement and feel proud, If the age gap is huge between them there is a propabulity of not watching the success of there children which becomes sad for the kid who thought of showing his success.
to sum up, having larger gap benefits in a financial manner but in the emotional perspective it has drawback. I consider the money doesnot matter if we cannot see the success of our loved ones or show. Thus, the disadvantages outweigh the positives.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 61
- The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 61
- Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now-a-days
now-a-days, the age gap between the parent and the...
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Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a happy way" with adverb for "happy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t they can live and grow their children in a happy way. After having kids the main duty of the...
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Line 2, column 491, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sends'.
Suggestion: sends
...usiness and made proper savings then he send his son or daughter to any school or co...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...id who thought of showing his success. to sum up, having larger gap benefits in a...
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Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a financial manner" with adverb for "financial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to sum up, having larger gap benefits in a financial manner but in the emotional perspective it has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, for instance, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69731800766 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48776162117 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1427385738 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214098868254 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741848771083 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754848209197 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123379632819 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654002434826 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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