The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart gives the information about the number of men and women attending an adult education centre in the year 2009 while the pie chart illustrates the percentage of their age profiles respectively.
Overall, the two charts show that most of the people attending the course are women and the majority came from high age groups rather than younger groups.
We can easily see from the bar chart that the number of female participants were more than male ones except for the sculpture course.There were 25 women participating in the painting course, with 5 people more than men. Furthermore, the females were twice as many as the males in both language course and drama course where the female numbers were 40 and 20 while the male figures stood at 20 and 10 respectively.
Looking at the pie chart, it is clear that a majority of the participants were at the age of 50 or over rather than the younger ages. 42% of the participants were from the aged 50 or over group, which was much higher than the rate of 5% from those aged under 20. 26% of students came from the group of age 40-49,and there was a lower rate of 16% with those aged 30-39.Meanwhile, the group with the least attendance was the 20-29 one (only 11%). Apparently, the percentage of participants is proportional to their age profiles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, look, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68713681447 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8484606343 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.625 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 16.8248392259 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334059294774 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158428090751 0.0766984524023 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149347795465 0.0603063233224 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246136884953 0.12726935374 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167211611256 0.0580467560999 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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