Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. Why do you think this happens? Is this positive or a negative trend?
it is believed that the feasible solution to enhance road safety is raising the legal driving age. I partially agree with this statement for the following reasons.
On the one hand, increasing the minimum legal age for driving car brings about at least two advantages to be mentioned. one of the main benefits is that the collisions rate caused by teenagers' reckless driving is more likely be lessen. this is because people who is in their twenties or thirties tends to have better awareness of traffic regulations, for example, avoiding drink - driving or driving in a wrong line. In addition, teenagers have more time to sharpen their skills to react unexpected circumstances occurred on the road by participating defensive driving course. this leads to minimize a number of would-be traffic offenders which is on the rise in the past few years.
On the other hand, there are some considerably drawbacks. The primary reason is that nowadays, parents are usually occupied with their hectic schedule. As a result, children have to take driving by themselve to school or other education center. If this law is imposed by the government, these young adults will not have the ability to commute independently and always have to rely on others who are able to get a driving licence. Consequently, it is inconvenient and time-consuming. Another bad point is, students from unprivileged family need driving licence to make a living. As a matter of fact, many young adults work for Grab-bike service to earn money to prevent their parents suffer from financial burden. Compared to being waiter or security guard, working as a driver is a better option. They have flexible time and can receive more tips during the day.
In conclusion, I hold the view that both are true to a certain extent. there should be various solutions taken at the same time to deal with this problem
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- Some people believe that the best way to increase road safety is increasing the minimum legal age for driving cars To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops Why do you think this happens Is this positive or a negative trend 11
- Increasing the minimum legal age for driving car do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97133757962 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73359694911 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6770420307 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7222222222 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0563033349396 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0173088312184 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028477060789 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0414952110708 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136230756555 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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