The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts give the information about Southland's how many transporting in International tourism, dairy products, meat products in the year of 2000 2020 and future projection for 2025.
Overall, it can be manifested that there was a meat product was the lowest but then dairy products and international tourism increasing in all the years. Whereas export of dairy production shows the fluctuates nature. And meat production was the decreasing from 2000 to 2025.
First of all, in the year 2000, International tourism was the $8 billion exporting. Which was followed by dairy products was $7 billion. However, meat products were the $1 billion decrease for the dairy products comparison ($6 billion). And then the year 2020, International tourism was $9 billion transport and dairy products were the $10 billion transportation. Meat products export for $5 billion. And this is small fluctuated in those years.
Secondly, the future protection 2025, International tourism will be the highest billion dollars in export for the future ($10 billion). Dairy products were around 0.5 billion dollars-decrease (around $9.5 billion) respectively. Lastly, meat product exporting was the very lowest ($5 billion).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54970760234 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03268110425 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485380116959 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2124762432 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120542183748 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660275118602 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865604373024 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12093985236 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103656165707 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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