The following memorandum is from business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants. The Author solely made strong assumption that by ever replacing butter by margarine there is less complaints from customer. Even though the customer may not distinguish butter from margarine. There are several assumption made by author, so arguments may become fail. But before this memorandum to implemented let us look in to detail.
Firstly, Author gives idea abut replacement of butter by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United states. This change may happen only in southwestern part of united states, what about remaining area. Whether this peoples are daily customers for restaurant or they like to take dinner in restaurant. among all if manager thing do differently he may done change for attracting the customers.
Secondly,This change made little impact on customers.only 2% people complaint out of 100. Whether remaining 98% customer are well known with change or just 2% of customer have understood the change. There may be categories of peoples who really test the meal and who just meal and leave the things. If 2% people have varieties of test they even better understood in better.
Thirdly, Even if customer ask for butter do not complain when they are given by margarine instead. Even customers recognize that instead of butter waiter serve the margarine they firstly complaint to manager. Manager may try to convince about benefit of margarine and its advantages. so that they may not complain.
Lastly, Author assume that customer may not distinguish butter from margarine or they use the term butter to refer to either butter or margarine. Author can't take into consideration, as there may several benefit of margarine than butter. so they prefer to the margarine and even though the may have same practice in home meal. The people are living there life in Healthiest way, having maintain there fitness. The
may thing that consumption of butter may lead to increase fatness and also affect on body.
To sum up with all, before making any assumption author need to consider several other factors which may leads to strengthen assumption.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are less complaints'?
Suggestion: there are less complaints
...t by ever replacing butter by margarine there is less complaints from customer. Even though the customer...
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Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun complaints is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... replacing butter by margarine there is less complaints from customer. Even though t...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...there is less complaints from customer. Even though the customer may not distinguish butter...
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Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...nguish butter from margarine. There are several assumption made by author, so arguments may become...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...utter from margarine. There are several assumption made by author, so arguments may become...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Among
...they like to take dinner in restaurant. among all if manager thing do differently he ...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'do' or 'be done'?
Suggestion: do; be done
... if manager thing do differently he may done change for attracting the customers. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , This
...or attracting the customers. Secondly,This change made little impact on customers....
^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and who just meal and leave the things. If 2% people have varieties of test they e...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...enefit of margarine and its advantages. so that they may not complain. Lastly, ...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...enefit of margarine and its advantages. so that they may not complain. Lastly, Autho...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r to either butter or margarine. Author cant take into consideration, as there may s...
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Line 9, column 197, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'several benefits'.
Suggestion: several benefits
...t take into consideration, as there may several benefit of margarine than butter. so they prefe...
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Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...veral benefit of margarine than butter. so they prefer to the margarine and even t...
^^
Line 9, column 361, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the Healthiest'.
Suggestion: in the Healthiest
... meal. The people are living there life in Healthiest way, having maintain there fitness. The...
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Line 10, column 76, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...r may lead to increase fatness and also affect on body. To sum up with all, before mak...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 352.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26988636364 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72273385329 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7501445295 57.8364921388 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.652173913 119.503703932 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3043478261 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236783560118 0.218282227539 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778518818329 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11191568371 0.0701772020484 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112274524875 0.128457276422 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109647596216 0.0628817314937 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are less complaints'?
Suggestion: there are less complaints
...t by ever replacing butter by margarine there is less complaints from customer. Even though the customer...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun complaints is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... replacing butter by margarine there is less complaints from customer. Even though t...
^^^^
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...there is less complaints from customer. Even though the customer may not distinguish butter...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...nguish butter from margarine. There are several assumption made by author, so arguments may become...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...utter from margarine. There are several assumption made by author, so arguments may become...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Among
...they like to take dinner in restaurant. among all if manager thing do differently he ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'do' or 'be done'?
Suggestion: do; be done
... if manager thing do differently he may done change for attracting the customers. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , This
...or attracting the customers. Secondly,This change made little impact on customers....
^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and who just meal and leave the things. If 2% people have varieties of test they e...
^^
Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...enefit of margarine and its advantages. so that they may not complain. Lastly, ...
^^
Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...enefit of margarine and its advantages. so that they may not complain. Lastly, Autho...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r to either butter or margarine. Author cant take into consideration, as there may s...
^^^^
Line 9, column 197, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'several benefits'.
Suggestion: several benefits
...t take into consideration, as there may several benefit of margarine than butter. so they prefe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...veral benefit of margarine than butter. so they prefer to the margarine and even t...
^^
Line 9, column 361, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the Healthiest'.
Suggestion: in the Healthiest
... meal. The people are living there life in Healthiest way, having maintain there fitness. The...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 76, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...r may lead to increase fatness and also affect on body. To sum up with all, before mak...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 352.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26988636364 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72273385329 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7501445295 57.8364921388 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.652173913 119.503703932 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3043478261 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236783560118 0.218282227539 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778518818329 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11191568371 0.0701772020484 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112274524875 0.128457276422 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109647596216 0.0628817314937 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.