You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside.
This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
A very rapid growth in the economic sector of different countries can be found all over the globe. So, a change in the lifestyle and living standard has become visible to us. However, such change is only limited to the city areas and not quite noticeable in the rural sides. This type of variation living standard can cause more harmful to the overall development of a country.
Firstly, if a city gets modernized, than it means better access to health and care facilities to the city dwellers; which ultimately leads to low rates of death. More children are born with access to education. As the population increases, the quality of education might decrease. Moreover, the number of unemployed individual will rise as well.
Secondly, the overall urban society will have to hire paid workers to do their basic works as everyone would be too busy with their own office works.
Thirdly, if all progress are city centered, it means all the head-quarters of various enterprises are constructed within the city limits making the cities look like modern slums.
Finally, the villages will lack in education, health benefits and employments. So, the villagers would have to move to the urban areas to earn livelihood. This will make the cities densely-populated with barely functioning rural communities. There remains a chance that the village-dwellers will sort to crime to make a living.
So, modernizing only the urban locations can become detrimental to the nation. To avoid that kind of outcome, the government should act soon and make proper policies in urbanization of the rural communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14122137405 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87520125188 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8411752563 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117021975264 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378564477614 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435478280371 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541047778508 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569321128278 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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