Some people think sports plays an important role in society other think they are nothing more than a leisure activity.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A school of thought is, there are several benefits of sports to society. Others, however, disparage this notion and the find, Sports are just a source of recreation. Let's figure is out ,which strand holds more substance?
Those asserting,sports may do wonder for society have their view up.for a start, with help of sports, people can keep fit and fine as well as,they can increase their own stamina. Furthermore, they can help to development own nation .say IPL tournament event is pretty famous in india, an Asian country, For it can create thousands of employment opportunities, with which one can run their kitchen and fulfill their needs what is more,if sports are played,it he lps to develo sense of brotherhood and altruism,with which in the society, prevails unity .In this way, playing games is excellent for community.
Then, there are those whose conviction is the other way round what they feel is playing games is leisure time activity .After playing one can feel fresh as well as it reduced the level of stress Also, one can easily spend their time during holiday or weekend vacations. To illustrate in Indian culture, many families when gets together they like playing different sports like cricket .In fact cricket is popular with indianinmanyvacations playing to them.
After mulling over both facts thoroughly it would be no exaggeration to wrap up saying that with the help of sports,people can keep fit and fine and reduce their stress. Also, playing sports is a great full-time activities and it is one of the entertainment sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, in fact, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03488372093 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84002751125 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.363047709 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157309182975 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663896312387 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274969361415 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941308003035 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224678153004 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.