Financial burden has always been a concern to each of us, hence, many prioritize their economic earnings more than anything which includes the real inner value in their working life. To an extent, monthly gains are essential but they are not everything.
Financial burden has always been a concern to each of us, hence, many prioritize their economic earnings more than anything which includes the real inner value in their working life. To an extent, monthly gains are essential but they are not everything.
Let just be realistic, a high-salary job requires the inevitable sacrifices. An average worker has to spend at least 9 hours at work, thus, how many hours would it take a manager at work to deal with tons of deals? Being deprived of not just sleep but also the invaluable moments with close relationships, … are one of the unavoidable prices that achievers have to pay. Would you not attend at your child’s baseball match to grind the deals at your office? In long term, this will leave a devastating expression in your child as his parent choose career beyond them.
Everything comes at a cost, however, strive for a high-pay job will have the certain profits comparing to an average career. Coming along with high economic gains are the better, upper-hand amenities, chances in life. At some extents, the intriguing sense of power is also one of the reasons leading to the strive for this type of job. However, a person has to spend at least 2 decades working in their life, choosing a high-pay job will really be a choice when he or she has to put everything aside for this job?
In conclusion, we all have to pay the piper for our choice, thus, an average-pay job or a strive-hard-earning career is just the optional choices.
- With the increasing use of and development of new technology many machines are now able to do the work which people use to perform What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend 61
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 84
- Nowadays some parents put a lot of pressure on their children What is the reason for doing that Is this a positive or negative development for the children 56
- Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society 89
- The crime rate will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes Do you agree or disagree 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...essential but they are not everything. Let just be realistic, a high-salary job...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, really, so, thus, as to, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72413793103 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70055970302 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1105555513 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280424566565 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112527921685 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207119810244 0.0667982634062 310% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262260672248 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.361382713421 0.056905535591 635% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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