In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good, while others believe this is a problem for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The average age of country's population is significantly important.While it is believed by some people that older people are more beneficial for a country while others think this trend causes serious challenges. Here,both points have been discussed to prove the opinion.
The main reason is as technology is advancing,younger generation is moving into different parts of the world leaving their parents behind.Many of them make their career and settle in respective countries,but old people refuse to do so.They don't prefer to go out from their comfort zone.Also,they are getting many facilities from the government.When the most of the public is old,the burden of allocating budgets to programs such as maternity will be lifted from government's shoulder,allowing this capital to be assigned to improve many schemes such as transportation.
Another angle on this argument suggests that having an old population will cause a serious problem.
Older people are more prone to various kinds of cheat and fraud as well.People can take disadvantage of older people specially those who are staying along.Also,an aged populace will lead to a shortage of workforce,preventing companies from being able to recruit young workers which ultimately will result in many financial problems.Canada,for example is suffering from old majority whose inability to work has led to a drop of 9% in its GDP.
We, as a human have to understand that everyone has to go through this phase of life.It impacts country's economy in the long run,but that doesn't mean they are burden on an individual country.
In conclusion,will say that considerate proportion of older people can be helpful to any country but if it reaches to an extreme proportion, then it might be the problem for goverment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31785714286 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36676243381 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.57755431 49.4020404114 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.714285714 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277586070596 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136597040753 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987371359934 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145467655378 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116955134668 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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