Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
· advise them of your situation
· explain how this is affecting you
· request a new card
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Kiran and I am a last year Mechanical engineering student.I am writing this letter to tell you that I lost my id card in the college premises.Actually,I was parking my vehicle in the parking area and card was in my pocket.I visit library now and then to refer the books.I kept my card in pocket so that can take out immediately when required.But,unfortunately lost the same somewhere.Due to this,now I am facing much difficulty.
When I visited the library,they told without card;book won't be issued.Other problems include access to the lab.Need an id card to enter.Without that,will not be able to do some design analysis in the lab.Also I have to give design report during my last project along with other work.
It is my last year so I request you to please look into this as a matter of urgency.I hope to receive a new card as soon as possible.
I am sure you will do the needful.
Yours sincerely,
kiran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Kiran and I am a last year Me...
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...ast year Mechanical engineering student.I am writing this letter to tell you that...
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Suggestion: Actually
...lost my id card in the college premises.Actually,I was parking my vehicle in the parking...
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...id card in the college premises.Actually,I was parking my vehicle in the parking a...
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... parking area and card was in my pocket.I visit library now and then to refer the...
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...library now and then to refer the books.I kept my card in pocket so that can take...
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Suggestion: But
... can take out immediately when required.But,unfortunately lost the same somewhere.D...
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...difficulty. When I visited the library,they told without card;book wont be issued.O...
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...y told without card;book wont be issued.Other problems include access to the lab.Need...
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...e to do some design analysis in the lab.Also I have to give design report during my ...
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Suggestion: I
...e look into this as a matter of urgency.I hope to receive a new card as soon as p...
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... will do the needful. Yours sincerely, kiran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65269461078 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35044789448 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.320905548 44.8134815571 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.4 76.5299724578 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.4 16.8248392259 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165720703178 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948092970121 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477757935445 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840953345513 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475515424422 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 8.37731958763 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 8.62886597938 353% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.