It is true that, in this contemporary era, parents are being focused on their children in a better way. However, number of individuals intropect that all activities of children should be supervised by parents whereas, other masses beleive that more liberty should be given to offsprings by parents. According to my perspective, freedom is the best option for children to live their own life.
To commence with, during childhood they are able to grow their creativity easily and if parents would give more focus and stop for doing everything then children would feel uncomfortable and start thinking our parents are bad. Secondly, good decision making power can be build by them if parents would give freedom to take their decisions themselves. Thirdly, parents should allow their children for wandering with their friends where they feel far better as compared to anything. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that those children are capable to do almost everything who have freedom instead of those children who have no freedom.
Looking at the other view, parents should also focus or take of their children. Moreover, if parents do not concentrate on their children sometimes then bad habbits are started to adapt by children like kidnapping, murder, stealing things from people. Secondly, attention should be given on their studies by parents because in this modern era, they waste their more time in playing games, and so on. Thirdly, parents should make some strict rule for their children routine as well. For instance, in my neighborhood, one boy used to live his parents were not able to give focus on him after that he fell in bad habbits and one day he was caught by police.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly parents can give attention towards their children and do some good things whatever they want yet, we must understand that freedom is also play an indispensable role in teenagers life. Furthermore, when children would get more opportunities they would do something great.
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- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places 78
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...heir friends where they feel far better as compared to anything. To exemplify, acc...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...we must understand that freedom is also play an indispensable role in teenagers life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09337349398 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64797754752 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545180722892 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0969989523 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.785714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388216449386 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155704668134 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669771062861 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253635372813 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591722073706 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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