The illustration shows information about how an igloo is built from snow.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pictures depict the process by which an igloo is constructed from snow.
Overall, it is evident that there are five major stages entailed in the process, commencing with the finding of appropriate snow, and ending at the entrance cover stage.
Looking at the information in more detail, hard-packed snow must first be found and then, with a snow saw, snow blocks are cut to proper size which is 8 inches in length, 3 inches in width, and 15 inches in height. Following this, large blocks are placed at the base in a circle building upward, whereas the edges of them are smoothed to fit with other blocks. Subsequently, a hole is dug under the wall to create an entrance, and an oversized snow block is put at the top of the igloo.
During the following stage of the process, loose snow is shoveled onto the outside of the igloo so that all crevices can be packed. The internal surface, afterwards, is smoothed by hand instead. Simultaneously, any excess snow will be shoved out. Finally, a hole is dug in the shape of the entrance and covered with snow blocks after that.
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- WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system Sum 78
- WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities For this reason some jobs are better done by men and others by women Do you agree or 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63212435233 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52927236914 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9186993341 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138700086418 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584779003728 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051360790321 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914164541912 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503929730336 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.