In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Nowadays a person in every country is facing a health related issues because of the increase in body weight. In the below essay I will try to enunciate the multifarious reasons for this problem, in addition I will try to provide some probable solutions to overcome this difficulty
To begin with, undoubtedly this fact is interlinked, if the weight of a person would amplify the level of health and fitness would diminish. There are various reasons for this predicament. Firstly, the main cause of the increase in weight is because of consuming fast foods which are rich in fats and lower in the o...
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This fast food not only gives rise to obesity, but even to other maladies
This fast food gives rise not only to obesity, but also to other maladies
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