In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In modern times, health and fitness are becoming the most critical factors in human life. people in some countries suffer from obesity and low-level of fitness. As a result, experts are willing to know the factors related to the particular scenario, and actions which could be taken to overcome this issue. this essay will explain in detail how busy life and technology advancement are the reasons, and the proposed solutions of health awareness programs and sports activities at workplace.
Without doubts, busy life and technology advancement are the main factors for the weight gain and health issues. people are getting more and more busy in their daily life which leads them to spend lack of time for exercising. In addition to this, advancement in technology makes human to do low amount of physical activities. For example, nowadays robots are used to clean the houses and workplaces where in old days people cleaned their own places which was a perfect workout to start a day. Analyzing the problems is important, but that should not be the end of the discussion.
Despite the problems explained above, there are few solutions we could endeavour to undertake such as health awareness programs and sports activities. The government could conduct awareness programs to people, which explains the health and weight issues. Another solution is conducting sports events by employers which motivates the employees to participate so they could keep their body fit and healthy.
To conclude, technology development and busy life would be the main causes of health issues; at the same time, it could be completely eradicated with the help of health campaigns and sports events. In my opinion, the government and employers should collaborate and take proper measures to stimulate the people to overcome the health issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24149659864 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6466803609 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0890406829 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217140315183 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759987317795 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335512119891 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130022013431 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139026188136 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.