Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.
To what extent do you agree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
or experience.
In this globalization era, people are getting used to traveling and relocating to different countries. Many think that it is vital for a person to adapt to another culture by learning about the traditions and customs of where they going to visit. I strongly agree with this statement.
To have the best communication with new people and development in a new community, a person must learn the habits of the localities. First and foremost, he needs to overcome the barrier of languages. If one wants to immigrate, he should study the slang, local words, and ways to use the words correctly instead of just the academic use of a language. Furthermore, he should be accustomed to the local basic routines and disciplines. An effective way to do this is to get involved in cultural activities and practices.
It is undeniable that a person can have many benefits from learning the customs of a region. One can widen his knowledge about another race, which may help him a lot in his career and life, especially if he desires to work and live in that nation. Additionally, he may limit misunderstandings and actions that are not fit the local’s traditions. For example, many actions may be common in his native culture but may not be ordinary and should be avoided in another.
In conclusion, I believe that studying the traditions of a different culture is essential for a person when they move to another nation due to its benefits for their self-improvements and help them to communicate with local people effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90347490347 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03717470135 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544401544402 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.436229917 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198732190342 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658247199547 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499827262417 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129177584854 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491247314104 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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