Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, there has been a stimulating discussion about the rising problem of environmental crisis, one of which is climate change. Some advocate that urgent actions should be implemented to combat the issue, while others suggest that self-adaptation and self-adjustment in human activities should be made. This essay attempts to analyze both sides of the argument and presents its final statement at the end.
There is no doubt that climate change has accelerated at an unprecedented rate largely due to human activities. Industrial waste, rapid urbanization, and enormous carbon footprints are a few of the culprits responsible for exacerbating the condition of climate change. As a result, as long as humans are still in denial of the problem and reluctant to take decisive actions, natural disasters, and extreme weather conditions certainly occur and increase their intensity, leading to catastrophic repercussions and irreversible consequences.
On the other hand, some view that fighting climate change requires tremendous international efforts and asks for a great trade-off of economic gain, so the proposal to adapt and adjust to climate change seems viable and doable. With the proliferation of environmental technology combined with the specialized knowledge of environmental experts, humans are now able to forecast the possibility of certain natural disasters. A valid point of illustration would be the environmental forecasting and detecting technology of tsunami, volcano eruption, and heatwaves by tracking changes in global temperature and other natural phenomena. Such technology provides prior insights into potential nature catastrophes and allows human societies to prepare, adjust, and adapt to drastic environmental changes.
In conclusion, even though human activities largely contribute to the process of climate change, relying on environmental technology appears to be a manageable option for humanity. However, in my opinion, I strongly believe that decisive actions from international collaboration are the key to decelerate climate change while befitting both human civilizations and the natural environment in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86075949367 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29656320335 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5172483304 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.333333333 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191335907141 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646251878447 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602131402323 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109366411961 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388143822387 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.