The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat by Asia, Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph elucidates how much below production of wheat in Asia Europe and other countries in the year between 1840 and 2000.
Overall, it can be manifested that the highest proportion of wheat production in Asia and Europe in the years 1840 and 1920. However, in the year, 2012 tuition can be observed.
Firstly, in the year 1840, Asia had the highest wheat produced which was 50percent as compared to Europe it decreased slightly which was 1 to 5th and the rest of the world only produced10 percent. However, the production of wheat in Europe after eight decades layers similar to Asia in the year 1840 and also Asia was produced and 50percent and rest of World it increased dramatically which was 30percent in the year 1920.
secondly, in the year 1880 Asia athe nd rest the of world produced with 30 and 26percent respectively in spite of Europe third highest in the all years which was 45percent. where as, in the year 1960 a qaurter produce wheat by Asia. Europe and rest of the world, which was approximately 39 percent similar. Lastly, in the year 2000 some fluctuation it can be observed,Asia was two-fifth wheat produced and it decreased dramatical in Europe which was 29 percent. surprisingly, rest of the world it increased moderately which was 32% in the given period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7802690583 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66132825125 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452914798206 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3685195832 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261521983641 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138561549568 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639435793452 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197808128683 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429879001899 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.